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It doesn't rhyme

Catchy opening
with a twist.
All the while the subtext
Deep
Compelling
Thoughtful.
But the ending needs work.

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dealeonessa
Jun. 16th, 2011 01:19 am (UTC)
So cute! Did you write that?
madladyred
Jun. 16th, 2011 03:43 am (UTC)
yes - thanks! i wrote it after a poetry club meeting where someone shared an absolutely brilliant poem. i was truly amazed by hers and wished I could rise to her level. instead i kind of described what i wanted my poem to be like - it was easier than actually writing at that level. plus, it made me giggle. a lot.

actually, it's a pretty good description of her poem, too, except she had a good ending!
dealeonessa
Jun. 18th, 2011 03:17 pm (UTC)
Awesome! I love it! In fact, it reminds me of a haiku!
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